I found the narrative very hilarious, the game definitely did a good job portraying your vision! I do have to say, the font and font color you chose, clash a bit with the rest of the visuals. Having the dialogue overlayed on top of the characters you are talking to is not the best design choice in my opinion, instead of having the text where it is, you couldve easily fit it in the textbox on the bottom of the screen and just resized the continue button to fit in there as well. These Changes would make the game more visually pleasing, as the character designs are already very good, unfortunately the UI just feels a little disconnected from the rest of the game.