I really enjoyed playing this, cant wait for future updates!
The caracter designs are awsome, and so are their personalitys-there is one thing though:
The english spelling and grammar is... VERY bad, especially in the 2nd half of the game, i mean seriously, google translate would do a better job at some points of the game.
Spelling mistakes are not a big deal for me, but wrong grammar is just kind of distracting, for instance: The question tags are used incorrectly most of the times. And the last few minutes are just a desaster- but everything else is fine, good work, i see a LOT of potential in this game!
I thaught it would probably help to get feedback like that, just in case the people in your discord didnt tell you already. I belive it makes a very noticable difference in the whole vibe of the game when the text is easy and smooth to read, i would say it makes a rather big difference in how people perceive the quality of the game.
Keep up the good work, and maybe talk to whoever is responsible for the english translation, there is much room for improvement!
I hope this was in any way helpful! :)