Thank you so much! I'm glad you like my melodies. The melodies in this song are kept simple and repetitive to not distract much - the 9/8 time and changing rhythm possibly distract enough already ;). And no, Glass Space and Studio Violins were not intended to sound like breathing; they were just slow pad-like instrument which I could put in the background. But I like the idea of them sounding like slow breathing, it adds to the atmosphere :D.
Thanks again, can't wait until next jam :)