Like the concept the game has, when done well teaming up with the villain can easily be one of the best parts of a story so having the game revolve around that is fun to mess with. Just quick question/suggestion and an issue I noticed on one of the playthroughs.
Can it be possible to let Edgar stack multiple clauses if you try asking for something that's too high value? Like still go through the initial negotiation as is but then have him make a comment you're asking for too much and either he adds additional clauses of his own or make an offer that he'll agree to deal favoring you on condition you HAVE to agree to something next time he approaches you in morning for a deal, similar to how in SKA you'd get locked into pink events when your WP was too low.
The issue I noticed is that if Edgar debuffs Liora's default outfit with Discomfort it didn't go away whenever I switched out to either of the lewd outfits. Didn't really affect that playthrough as was on last day when I noticed but would be a bigger issue past the demo's 14-day limit.