Personally, I like the art right now. The rules only being player-facing sucks, but that's game-jam stuff for you.
There isn't a lot more to say. It's quite solid, I like the narrative being communicated through the rules and the overall efficiency of the writing. Rules-wise I like the "four strikes and you're out" of dying.
A little more information on the Club would be nice. Or, rather, the affect and thought it projects towards the characters. Newfound global connection creating feelings of hopelessness/inescapability toward the Club?
It's very tight, very nice! Looking forward to more!