Hi!
Thank you for your feedback, I noted some of it down. Unfortunatelly rewriting the story at this point is impossible... so I'll just take this L :D
I appreciate your willingness to listen to and note down some of my feedback. I understand that it may be difficult to rewrite or tweak the story, but at least there is always room for improvement to provide a better future experience, overall I believe polish and depth to be the most important part about any game, and I’m looking forward to seeing where my feedback may lead!