Nice pop-like progression, it's simple and light (not a bad thing) but in that simplicity you've communicated the theme very well. I was perhaps expecting a bit more of a backbeat, cross-stick on the snare perhaps like you used for the count-in? (maybe they were there and just a bit quiet in the mix?) Just an observation, my expectations are just that haha and I like having my expectations subverted!... it worked perfectly fine with the hi-hat accents, especially for a shorter piece which wasn't looking to build to something bigger 🙂 Perhaps if this had been extended further then a little more percussion would have been brought in for the next go-round. The chords at the end were a nice unexpected change also. Nice work 🙂