Ended up being way more busy than expected so I only managed to read a few lines here or there, but still got some typos and inconsistencies to point out (see below). Love the art though!
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would have to rewatch it to be sure, but I think there was no subtitle for "This peace lasted 5000 year" in the intro vid. Instead it jumped straight to "in the year 5222"
"Alone in this house I built with my own hands, A dull..." --> The "A" shouldn't be uppercase.
Is there no 'back to menu' or 'close game' button? EDIT: Seems there is, but only when on the map.
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Wait, didn't it say where was peace ever since The Broken? Then why does the game mention right when you arrive in Yulav Town that the area once featured a conflict between the 10 kingdoms and before that the Broken? That implies that a war involving ten kindoms, which is a lot, happened during the era of peace after The Broken.
Also first the MC says Yulav Town hasn't changed much after five years... then a few lines later he mentiones new houses, new roads and even new races he's never seen before?