Finally got around to reading this!! It was great. I loved the story, it was fun and silly and it made me jump with joy. :D
I liked the sort of manga-esque style it has since it was black and white, and the artstyle overall reminded me of a manga. I haven't seen that before for Visual Novels so I thought it was cool.
I also appreciated the use of Vocaloid music in this game lol. I was able to recognize Melancholic, Ghost Rule, and Darling Dance. :] I thought it was a little funny and random, but I still thought you made good use of it haha