Looks so great! So smart to make it so minimalistic, but despite that it's really clear and concise.
Ran it for a group of dnd players. It was our first foray in to shadowdark and we had a ton of fun. The adventure is easy to follow along as a gm. Read it twice before the game and had no trouble running it.
I gave them two hooks (kick out the new “owner” and rescue the dames).
I really want to "yank" this format for my own adventure, I mean the minimalistic set-up, not the contents ofcourse. Can I mention you once I created the adventure?