this was SO funny lol (in a good way!) the dialog was perfect and very entertaining. i really like the creepypasta's interactions and how you gave them very distinct personalities. would love to see more of that in the future chapters. at first i thought it was gonna be cringe but you did a very good job, i had a great time playing the 1st chapter and i cant wait for more! the horror aspect is definitely lacking but i think it wont be an important part to focus on, yes? idk about your plans but if you could then i would very much enjoy a more detailed buildup with the characters, going from victims-killers to lovers, s'that. if it was meant to be short-medium length thats fine too! i wont ask for anything that gives you more problems.