Very well written!
Nice balance of JO content with legit character and plot development.
Main character inner dialogue, (both during the various sexual adventures as well as the inevitable freak out post mortems), is something you do very, very well.
A very enjoyable read!
My only criticism is I that found Mason, the main character, my least favorite of the bunch and couldn't help asking myself why ( beyond the fact that he has a big dick and must be very attractive) anyone would put up with him. Yes, you certainly gave him enough redeeming qualities, but OMFG he seems like an awful lot of work!
I think, the way you've set things up, regardless of the details, it's pretty much a given that Jack and Carl will continue to play a part in his inevitable journey,
My question is, what about Alfie?
He's the one I found most the interesting, not because he's an insatiable horn dog (though, I confess, that helps) but because his story is the most tragic and, in my opinion, the one most worth telling.
Though he serves as the catalyst for everyone else's journey, who's there to help him with his? Carl?
Will his visits to the city to see Mason, Jack and Carl lead to his salvation?
Poor Alfie, I really hope so.