I think the opening cinematic looks really professional, and overall the tutorial is pretty solid, it gets the basics across clearly. The art direction also shines, especially with the blonde girl and the one with glasses, they look very polished.
That said, a few areas could use improvement. When it’s raining, I’d love to hear a rain loop to deepen immersion. Some sound effects feel missing, like clicks, or when characters start talking, which would add a lot of life. The music also feels a bit loud by default. For story setup, I personally would prefer either more mystery or a subtle explanation instead of the “corny” style of hand-waving time travel (“How? Why? Nobody knows”). On the art side, the redhead seems under-rendered compared to the others, and the AI use might raise questions with certain players (though I personally don’t mind). Lastly, in your first real decision (introducing yourself to her parents), the choice didn’t affect the dialogue, I think you’d make a stronger first impression by showing branching right away. Also, one line, “I thought we were going to have another trouble”, might read better as “another problem.”
That said, the game is entertaining, and you clearly have a lot of talent in presentation and style. I’m probably not the target demographic, but I can already see how this could really click with its intended audience.