It was refreshing to see a text-based game in the jam, and this one pulled me in with its unique writing style and neat presentation touches the upward scrolling text, the paper styling, and the sound effects all added to the atmosphere. The story is interesting and at times abstract, though it could be clearer in how the protagonist’s memories connect, and a few small details (like the text jump with each line) distracted a bit from the flow.
The biggest opportunity here would be adding interactivity branching choices or decision points could really elevate the experience and make the narrative more impactful. Still, it’s a creative and distinctive entry, and I’d be glad if you also took a moment to try the game I submitted it shares that same spirit of experimenting within the jam.