I've loved what I've read so far; all the characters that have appeared are well-written. I liked the mechanics used and I like it when choices have consequences; this makes it possible to read more than once and still have something new.
Sorry for my English, it's not my native language (I had to translate your VN, I hope you don't mind; I don't plan on publishing it). I'll support you on Patreon as soon as possible.
Sorry for the long comment rs.