oh my god i LOVED this this was so good its genuinely insane. cant wait for cuapter 2 i NEED to meet kieran im going to enemies to lovers the shit out of that man. all that aside ohhh my god you did such a good job with everything but especially the description of mc guilt over the deaths of their siblings, farah as a grieving child, Mc refusing to back down and simply give into fate because fuck that!! they have to try!!! ughhh so good