This is quite late but I want to let you know that I love this game and that I think you wrote it very well - I felt the different tones from the characters and the way this game is phrased and worded was compelling to me.
Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad the different tones came across well, especially for a game with no description. It's a challenging to write only dialogue, for sure, but it can also add a lot of depth for the players to read into and discover on their own. Thanks again :)