The dialogue randomly swapping between in-game and breaking the forth wall really detracted from the game imo. In one moment Harvey says we’re doing this for the surgery, and the right after he says you’re sitting on a computer chair and clicking a mouse? Why would I care about supposedly hurting him while he says I’m clicking a mouse and he’s just drawn on my screen? It felt like the writing ran out of steam to make you care in-universe so it just resorted to fourth wall breaks to try and make you care but just did itself a disservice. If I don’t care or feel bad about clicking on Harvey, then it has no impact on me and the game failed its intention.
Also why doesn’t he just give you all the money when you take out the hammer or knife lol. He’s also saying you’re mad for using these weapons on him when he’s the one selling them to you and financially encouraging you to hurt him?
Voice acting is a great job though.