I beat it last night, it was a little easy I didn't actually die.. I had to restart because I alt tabbed and lost audio but it was fun. I suggest adding a zoom button if you're gonna add hidden characters. I wanted to get a better look at the character on the roof of the barn but I couldn't get close enough or the right position.
I also like how you added the notes lying around and some hidden for us to find and obtain the hidden story to it, I wasn't expecting a backstory of any kind when I first started since it was 3 bucks.
I think there may be a paper behind the barn after it turns dark but I couldn't check because the gate you added near the very end does NOTHING! The skeleton pony walked right through it and I was forced to run straight to the barn after assuming I was safe cause the gate was shut. :/
The game may be short but it's well worth three dollars, like c'mon people you act like they charged you 20 bucks for this.. Like what were you expecting some 5 hour game?
This game might be short sure, but it has story, they seemed to have their own music I think... I've never heard the song before and I've been gaming for over 14 years, character models are unique, and they're making a story for it. You know how many horror games i paid 10 bucks for just to get no story? TOO MANY!
The coin collecting was fine because you collect them surprisingly fast, the hidden notes were fine cause it gave you a story to find, and the length of the game was fine cause the Three dollar price tag with actual story.
The only changes I'd recommend in chapter 1 are editing the song that plays when the sun's out to loop better, having the gate at the end actually stop the undead ponies so that we can explore cause you only can run in a circle there you don't have many paths to confuse the undead, and adding a zoom button.
I recommended it to my buddy and Facebook page, I thought it was completely worth three bucks.