Sry if I butcher the English I am not a native.
Just made an Account to comment on this game. It is simply put amazing. At the start I just downloaded it purely because of the fact that it was a NSFW 18+ hentai game. And I just choose this one randomly.
1. But as I continued through the game I really have fallen in love with the different characters. And theire personalities.
And I have to say something I was not expecting to be saying before this game. But I wouldn´t mind that much if this was just a normal visual novel without the NSFW 18+ content.
It is by far the best game I have found in case of Unique Character visuals and personalities.
And I´m even hesitant to play certain scenes because of the emotional proccess that comes with it.
SPOILERS
(I.e the scene where you take Lin shopping and the slaver with his Elve shows up. And even if you choose the ´punch him in the face´ option nothing happenes).
2. Now onto the things that I thought of would be really cool from a Narrative Ending point of view.
SPOILERS from things I want to see.
The last scene of the game shows Penny standing over the graves of every single person from the game with theire Names as well as death dates engraved on it. So for Lin it would be a longer time span because she is and Elve and already over 300 years old. And maybe some pictures of them.
And you just see a sequence were she lays down flowers on every single grave and is crying. And behind her you see the orange red sun setting tinting the sky in orange red color.
The focus goes towards the sun and then the Credits roll. I know this probably will not happen because the creator could just add another floor to the hotel and new characters. But that is how I personally envision what my ending of the story would be.