The writing is not my style and I won't judge it.
The animations are great and well made !
I got the "Good ending" ( that's what the end screen told me :))
Theme is respected as it was a one-of-its-kind chain reaction
No bugs but lots of typos are present
If I can give some advices (For Visual Novel writing) :
- Be careful of the font you used for the texts as it makes it hard to read (notably for people with dyslexia or other visual impairments) + the green cyberpunk design on the textbox
- In terms of visual novel, it is often wanted to not write emotes (:D) in the text as it breaks immersion and fluidity in the reading
You can feel the passion in the game, keep it up !