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Love the game! I have a few points to highlight.

The characters are really unique, the story is amazing and engaging, and you can choose how much you want to experience. I remember one day I had so many events happening that I thought, "No way this is all in one day" I would be exhausted IRL, lmao. Also, the art is really cute, and I can see improvement in the later CGs. As a fellow artist, I really appreciate the time you put into them!

But there are some things I would love to see improved. The passage of time sometimes feels off like, are we still in the morning? Is it night already? Also, the interaction between choices and how other characters react to them could be more consistent. A good example is when August sleeps in the MC’s bedroom, everyone reacts to the choice of bringing him into the house, which was great (love the banter between him and Irvin). But a few times, events feel too disconnected. I remember at the reunion with Grandma, the conversation made little sense to me like it was the first time the MC was learning about his nature, even after all the info we got from everyone else, mainly Sally. Lastly, a few passages repeat themselves the same text appears twice, sometimes exactly the same, sometimes slightly different.

Overall, I’d say a solid 9/10. Again, love the game!

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Thank you so much for letting me know all these issues you spotted 💜 I’m really glad you still enjoyed the game despite them! I'll definitely try my best to correct them as soon as I can. I know there’s a lot going on (and a lot to polish), so feedback like this helps me keep track of what stands out most. And it makes me super happy you noticed the art improvements too! I'm glad to know the progress is noticed. Thanks again for the 9/10, that honestly means a lot :)