Yay!!! I can't wait! I'll continue to offer my feedback as more is released! Have a fantastic rest of your day and I wish for development to continue going well!
I'm so sorry I forgot to mention this my first time, but two of the lines at the end of the story, I believe the third and fourth to last lines, go off the screen a little bit, making them unreadable. Maybe the text could stay in the more central part of the screen to help prevent this.
I also forgot to mention that I love the art for the story as well, with everything only being made up of one line. It's very visually appealing! I also love that you must interact with some words to progress the story. I thought that was clever and engaging!
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