A nice low violence adventure, with some well-made NPCs and a novel plot. The only thing which jarred a bit with me was the inclusion of velociraptors and panthers, which felt like unusual choices for a fairly pastoral adventure. I would perhaps also make it clearer that the kobolds are meant to be there, as they make the silk (perhaps "kobold quarters" or "weavers' quarters" instead of "den"?) I also agree that the text is a bit dense.
But a solid entry which would be fun to run.