i love dream stories! especially when they get a bit weird. i also love how you had the mc meet a literal manic pixie dream girl, at least in the dream sense... it's definitely toxic enough. this vn felt a bit too short honestly, i was looking forward to seeing how the situation develops more, and was really curious about various things (such as who was the girl phoebe met in class... i wonder...) but that's pretty much the only criticism i have.