Pretty neat idea. The art work is nice, and the music matches the vibe I'd say.
The voiceover is pretty cool but I'd suggest use some audio editing software to edit the audio and remove the background noice and the whooshes. Although this type of voiceover does fit the narrative of the game
The movement could use some work as well. And sometimes you can interact with the same place again and again. Also have an interact in and interact out animation or some sort of indication to tell that the cutscenes is over.
A map would be nice as well. You can have it so that you can only walk across the street on a walkway. Since colliding with cars and not dying seems a bit weird and out of place
The narrative of the game is interesting and can resonate with a lot of people.