The game had some really nice artwork and character designs, they were really enjoyable to see! The music was also well done. I had the same issue as the comment below, where I kept advancing but didn't see the dialogue change. I was also able to break the game in a couple ways, nothing major, but I was able to escape the boundaries and wander off forever into the green void, and if I tried going behind some structures like the tree or the coop, my character would be superimposed in front of it. I also think your characters could face different directions and turn to face you, which would make them feel more natural. I think what happened with the dialogue was an unfortunate glitch, and I would hate to see a good story and game idea go to waste because of it. If you're able to patch out this glitch, I would love to download this game again and get to play through all of your hard work!