Don't get me wrong, but I think you should add to history some type of main antagonist, because sometimes story feels too easy for MC, like nothing makes worry about MC. A good character for that role is That goth girl, Reason:
1.Don't get me wrong but she acting strange and she just looks crazy. 2. She connected to government and we know government was part of air plane crash. 3. She is part of something bigger!! I'm mean that Iceland with big screen and 3 mask ladies. 4. And I personally think she kidnapped girl from the shop,and I think she killed mother of white hair lady.
It's just theory and kind of recommendation. Thanks 💯
Sorry if I said something stupid or wrong or made any misunderstandings🙏🤝