So this game is really fun but I think you need to fade the objects in the foreground like the houses and trees transparent when they get too close to the camera. I've attached a screenshot where a tree in the foreground is completely hiding everything else from view.
Other than that it's a great game! Nice little story haha. Great work! (Side note: your dialogue boxes were very nice and neat and I loved your art!)
Also I'd appreciate feedback on my submission if you get a chance!