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Adam is THE IDIOT in ep4… No, I can’t bear it anymore. The story was good for the first 3 parts, but then everything went wrong. Why, why did you have to put such a kind of misunderstanding, ghosting and manipulation by Eve? The MC is not a child, but he behaves literally as one. My initial thoughts about Eve were good, just a woman who can’t express her feelings, but this… “Don’t listen to her, don’t talk to her, forget her”. And what does Adam do? facepalm What a bad writer you are when out of ideas. I don’t even talk about the absence of belly changes in feeding scenes in the episode.

Maybe they will talk through this situation, but I don’t have any desire to read all of the manipulations before it. What I thought about the next story, when Eve was first introduced. It might be a harem-like relationship, where Adam feeds two girls at the same time. Everything hints at it. But then…

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Thank you for the feedback, but I think you misunderstood the game and characters. Eve does seem to be a shy, uptight, career-oriented woman. But beneath the surface is a toxic and manipulative personality who will say and do anything to get what she wants. I did make Adam a bit naive but it's explained by him being heartbroken by his realization that he may have misunderstood his standing with Mary. And his inability to see Eve as a sexual being due to him only ever seeing her as a seemingly asexual career-obsessed loner. Maybe you didn't get ALL that (conveying that is harder when it hinges entirely on how the player reads the text.) but I think I made most of it clear enough. This game was never meant to be a harem game. I don't think I hinted to it. It's a realistic look at a relationship involving feederism. The decision to have Eve act in that way was there from the start. I did tone her down a bit from her original character design in recent episodes but her acting in this way was always where the story was going. Sorry, the game wasn't what you were looking for but it's written the way I wanted it. I hope this at least clears things up as to what this game is meant to be for people.