So far the best module I’ve read. Just really really solid!
Theme: On point. Nittiyam is a great name. The time travelling concept is really well done. Love the chronovores and raptors.
Writing: Includes exactly what I need to know and nothing else. Content wise I initially felt that it was a little spare — most rooms being empty — but when I got to the final room I realised where the meat of this module is. Also, the magic items are very throughtfully written.
Layout: Exceptional. Your typography is so good. Extremely readable. I’m sure you had to do lots of editing to keep the word count low enough for a larger point size, and I assure you it was worth it.
Art: Good art, used with intention.
Playability: Like I said earlier, I initially struggled to conceptualise running this as I was reading through, but this is because I imagined running it as a standalone module/one shot. Clearly this module would work excellently as a random encounter in a hexcrawl or similar sandbox. It made me really want to throw a party into that final room and see what they did.