This was really good. You probably should specify which models you used from Kenny Assets
But if it is all of them, then I can't really complement the visuals, since you didn't make them. But it was still a really cool game, it did have some good atmosphere. And despite there being no real introduction or anything, it was pretty easy to figure out what to do. And it also helps given the ending and the fact that you are trying to sort of forget everything, so not knowing what is going on at the start is actually a plus.
I do think that some of the locations of things is a little bad. The bag with the barcode was kind of hidden in a way that wasn't super fun and the hydraulics were just impossible to find in my opinion.
I also found out that you can clip out of the train if you rub yourself against the wall in between the storage areas and the passenger part of the passenger train car.
Also, while I do like the use of both a loupe and a time loop, I don't really understand the actual plot significance of the time loop or the monster that kills you at the end of the time loop.
I think what would have been maybe better is instead of a monster killing you, you leave the train car and you are presented with some kind of happy ending because you forgot the incident that happened before it cuts to black and you are forced to play through it again until you find everything relating to that incident.
But overall, it is a solid game, and if it was expanded on a little bit further. Like with some dialogue and with more cars and more of a plot. I could see this being an actual game.