Really cool stuff! I was looking over it last night, there's some stuff i had found
There's a typo on page 19 under 508 "morals" instead of "mortals"
Also it might be redundant with information later in the book, but I think when you're introducing the mechanics of the soulblight on page 8, a sentence explaining that the table you'll be rolling on (Despair/Hatred) is going to be determined by the source of the infection. I was kinda confused on why it was separated until I saw monster stats.