In game Issues
Default Settings
There is not any text when answering the question the game asks for the "do you believe ... makes human keep on living". There are some grammatical errors throughout the game. Upon selecting the first input, I am met with a white screen. Upon selecting the second input, the screen is frozen at the same page.
After seeing the comments, it's a bug and it should be in fullscreen. It needs to be optimized at its default settings. People are inclined to leave if the game is not working. Players should not have to look around trying to see how to make your game work. It is a bit disappointing after playing in fullscreen because of the issue above, because of how great the artwork is. Please try to get it fixed soon! You can scale down the art if possible and look into making the game playable for different screen sizes.
Changing Text
There are some grammatical errors in the narration. I would also change the text to: Do you believe that hopes and dreams gives people a reason to live? ex. '58% bachelor degree holders express difficulty in finding work'
Music/SFX
SFX for the news and home would be good. As for the music ehh. I think stock sounds might be better to indicate they are on their phone: ex. audio from a youtube video, watching the news, notification from social media sfx.
UI
Dialogue in room would look better if it was stylized as a comic bubble with a black background and white textnear the player. Or at the bottom like classic VN games.
Posters are a nice touch but they do not look coherent with the art style. I would keep the hideo kojima poster, or have the artist create posters with their style to keep things in line.
Instead of using E, I would suggest space bar to skip dialogue. I ended up pressing space and was prompted to start over, but it is confusing why I had to. The placement for it is not good, and I would outline the goal of the game and change it to E for interaction (common).
After a second run it seems to not work anymore when it gets the the unemployed rates high. If the purpose is to simply restart the game to battle the laziness, the game is unfortunately unplayable at this time.
Overall, the narrative is okay and the artwork is good. But, it is a game first and foremost and it must be optimized and playable. The audio can be much better. Ultimately as far as enjoyment goes, it is not good at worst and meh at best. The player experience is not very good because of the default settings issue and it being unplayable when you have to restart. The UI can be changed with player experience in mind.
Instead of having to restart, I would find a different way to implement a game mechanic where you have to resist being lazy. It could be through a series of minigames, interactions with other people in the game, etc. It is not practical to restart every time to make progress.