I like how this is going!
I notice the grammar is noticed already so, I hope you get some help there. I'm not native so, I don't mind much haha. Otherwise, I got a few ideas:
I see a lot of potential with the worlds. The societies run similar, but I think you can get a lot more differences out of it too. Take for example "racism" from human world. "Race" is word used to categorize humans -- within a specie. In a furry world though, there's many species. Since canine vs feline and other topics is brought up, some made-up word like "speciesism" could be used instead. That could bring some interesting conversations like, how humans are the same species but still can't get along or whatever. There's a lot of creativity you can put into the furry world like that, and would be really cool if you thought out some more.
That also reminds me the dialogue is kinda fast. I don't think you need to rush through that kind of parts, and I think that moment is important to get to know your world and stuff. Take your time!
I really enjoyed your art! Keep it up! :)