For a first game jam game it's quite great! I quite liked the writing, it wasn't anything extraordinary but it made the experience feel more lively (I especially found the rat quite funny). The looping mechanic was a bit finnicky, sometimes it wouldn't detect a loop even when one was there, but for being done on a time constraint it's totally serviceable. Also I struggled a little with the simon says bottom left puzzle, it's a bit harder than usual because drawing a loop takes some time (which isn't a bad thing), but the lights for the switches felt like they'd randomly not turn off which I wasn't sure if it was part of the puzzle or a bug.
Still I'm happy to see others taking inspiration from Pokemon Ranger! I've also done a game that tries to replicate its mechanic, but it's a bit simpler and more arcadey, feel free to check it out if you want