That was pretty epic writing. The game itself was fine, got a little tedious, I think if you were going for a grind, you got it. If you were going for a bit more fun/casual, the purchase prices might need to be lowered a tad. Also, I had to get the DAD ending. I feel personally attacked. :)
Art style and sound were good. I liked the money hat. It was only on my 2nd playthrough that I realized he wasn't a evil penguin. Good job overall!