I really like the concept.
Some things I liked:
- Love the personality of the bad guy. Very polite, and he gives you hints!
- Music is great!
- Movement is fast and smooth.
Just a few things I would improve:
- Would be nice to have mouse controls in addition to keyboard controls, at least for the menus and for advancing dialogs.- It should probably start zoomed out and let you zoom in. Most of the time I played the level zoomed out.
- I got confused on the second level and couldn't finish it. The enemies walk through the lightning barriers seemingly without taking damage - not sure if I just need to make them walk through 3 or more. If so, maybe a damage indicator on the enemies to show they're taking damage but not enough?
- Needs a reset button, preferably with an on-screen reminder of what it is, in case I forget.
Overall, a good entry!