Finished the game! The mechanic of hooks and the story are nice! Improvements I would consider are the movement of character (it's too slow overall) and ability to skip subtitles (because I read faster). Well done!
Thanks! Yeah, game definitely not polished the way I want) Proper end screen would be nice for sure) For movement I wanted to show that your are small and not almighty character, so I tried to find some balance with that.