Here's a video of my playthrough, which contains my feedback. I play your game at 2:08:44
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For the tutorial, I really don't think you need all that text. The game isn't super complicated and actually could probably be intuited by 80% of players with no tutorial at all. Imagine if the original Super Mario Bros. started with a wall of text explaining all of the obscure mechanics of the game and a list of enemies and all their abilities. It would be completely unnecessary. That's kind of what you're doing when your tutorial spends most of the space explaining the scoring system.