good, i like the pixel art, and the art style of marie in main menu, and i am surprise in this game has chinese translate, i want play your next game. but i also want report some bug and give some suggestion.
first, Marie can't walk smoothly on the slope and looks like it is stuck.
second, if rerun game, the girls' rescue progress will be reset. this game is short, so it not a big problem, but if your next game are longer and also has collect system in entire game, this bug will be very horrible.
there has some suggession base on my personal opinion:
the combat is kind monotonous, against normal enemy, all i need to do is walk to it, then punch it until it die.
player movement is a bit stiff, and the thing that impressed me most was that when walking off a platform, the momentum would be reset to zero, forcing the player to fall straight down.
I think this game could be better, so i really hope can see your next game.
Good Luck.