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Funnily enough, the first thing I thought of when reading through this was "this would make for a solid template for a Swyvers city." That system struggles with grounding the setting with a story in my opinion, but this adventure could act as a skeleton to build around. The graphic design elements are nicely integrated, and the layout is clean. Following the jam, I would encourage you to make a second editorial pass for typos and removing the duplicate entries of the South and East gates to reclaim a little space to use for either additional details or maybe a fun graphic of a Crimson Eye Curse victim. Thanks for sharing.

i had not considered this as a possibility, but i believe you're right, it could work as a setting for Swyvers. I also saw some errors in the writing, i'll correct the later after the jam is finished, thanks for reviewing!!!