Love the art and the concept! Super 90s box art feel from your logo and in game graphics.
I kept getting annoyed by the constant dialogue pop-ups and felt you could have explained a lot less, or make them not interrupt the flow of play. The checkpoint for example is pretty clear as to it's function.
Overall very neat entry!
I appreciate the feedback! I did worry the dialogue popped up a little too often, but I definitely wanted to showcase the writing as part of the experience and only had so much time to build real estate for it. So yeah some dialogue is really unnecessary in the long run, but for the small bite that I could offer I felt it was worth a little bit of interruption.
