I really like the art style and the narrative elements of this game. My only criticism would be that it's a little tricky to track the bars as they're moving in a loop, but I guess that's required for the theme. But overall, good game :)
We also thought it was a bit hard to track the moving loops but didn't have time to adjust it further unfortunately. At one point in development the loops spun even faster than they do now and it was even harder to track them lol