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Made it in 1st place!

It took me a while to figure out how to start playing, and then I noticed the proceed button in the bottom right corner. In general, people’s eyes will be drawn to moving things, maybe if the player hasn’t pressed the button in a while it can start jumping up and down.

Second, there’s a lot of time between decisions where the player avatar is just moving to the next thing without me needing to do anything. I would condense that period of time so that most of the time spent playing is used actually making decisions instead of watching the character move down.

Congrats on your submission!