Loved the writing, it was quite the gripping story! One suggestion would be to add some background ambience in order to further sell the vibe (unless there was sound and my browser was just playing up). Great Work!
Aw shoot, there was a whole soundtrack! It's linked in the About section. Didn't even realize it wasn't playing in the build version, dangit, it worked in the dev version. :(
Workaround: go to the link in the about section and play it while playing, I guess :D
