I think with a little bit of thoughtful layout editing, this could pretty much fit in the jam's assigned parameters, so I'm not too worried about it being oversized. Always happy to see others take a whack at analogue art. This adventure has a weird, pulpy vibe (Appendix N's style through and through), but it could benefit from some legibility considerations; even a two column layout would go a long way in some places. Thanks for sharing.