I enjoyed the quirky wall of text, and the game loop had a very nice charm to it that kept me hooked for quite a while longer than I expected. :)
My only complaint is that there were multiple times throughout the game where I felt lost. As in, am I going in an intended direction? I had to make some leaps of faith, and after landing, couldn’t tell which direction was the right one (sometimes it was left).
My jam partner and I found the ending by chance, so I got to see the game complete. But I feel we mostly got lucky.
So I do want to ask: Is there an intended order/path in which players are supposed to reach the end?
I did enjoy seeing the little glitchy bits throughout the map (very fun) but also, I could not always tell if I was progressing forwards or backwards.