Honestly, this is my ratings:
Creativity: Neat idea, I thought this was a game where you loop until you do it right but it actually has a cool story. I did not expect the MC to have a mental breakdown lol
Enjoyment: This is pretty short (or should I say 'little' lol), I would love to see more efforts, story and gameplay added to the game (not saying this is bad tho)
Narrative: I love the straight forward approach of the dialouges
Artwork: The art in the game are good, but it's so little of them. Also, most of them looks like they're from MS Paint when you don't have much time left
Audio: I don't really see anything special with the audio
I look forward to the post jam version of this game (if you decide to do one ofc)!