The story is really realistic and the artwork is great. It really resonates with me. Lark was hesitant and confused at first, but with the protagonist's help, she finally chose to embrace her life, full of determination to step into the future with the protagonist. I really like the character Lark. She's sunny but also has her vulnerable side. She gets confused about her life... Just like us ordinary people. When strolling on the beach as a player, I got emotional too. So, it feels like I'm in love (?)
I have a few suggestions that might help with future updates:
① The descriptions could be better. Since they're dragons, there are a lot of human - like action descriptions. I think we can optimize the text. For example, change "bump shoulders" to "bump wings" and "hands" to "claws". Also, when describing characters, adding some details would be good. Like "Lark is grooming her feathers" or "August is playing with his claws". These are nice descriptions.
② This suggestion is a bit subjective. I don't know if others feel the same. But Lark's story is so short! It feels like it just stops suddenly. We were about to go to college, Lark was ready to face life, and she was with the protagonist, but then it ended? I was looking forward to it and ready for more, but it's like stopping before dawn. And Lark is really popular, at least in my circle. So I hope the author can extend Lark's story in the future. At least let me step into college life with her and solve the problem with Lark's grandma. Also, I have a fantasy - to marry Lark. It would be an amazing ending, though it might mean a lot more work for the author. But it's just my fantasy (I really hope for such an ending though!)
③ Gallery. The artwork in this game is really good. Every character is drawn with care. I can get these pictures from the game files, but they're a bit blurry. So I hope there's a gallery with high - definition artwork. I love every character, especially Lark!
I'm sorry I used a translator, so it might be a bit hard for you to read. Even though there's a language barrier between us, my love for your work goes beyond it. Thank you for making me feel the sensation of first love again after such a long time.
So please keep up the great work! I'm really looking forward to you creating an account on China's Bilibili platform to post videos, and also opening a sponsorship channel on the "Aifadian" platform！